hm.. sepertinya catatan kecil yang kubawa menghasilkan sedikit karya..
memang akan ku-post kan ke sebuah concept blog yg sedang kubangun beserta cerita Harold & Sunflower(s) yang sudah kuperbaiki grammar dan beberapa kata2nya.. tapi kutulis disni duluan semuanya yak..

setelah membaca, tolong berikan intepretasi dan penilaian anda masing2.. hohoho, aku pengen mensurvey karaky sendiri, so.. mohon bantuannya..


note: ini bukanlah puisi, melainkan cerita dalam bentuk haiku ataupun free verses (aku bingung menkategorikan diantar keduanya..)


ACT I

the sunlight dripping from her mouth.
flowing through the stream.
burned down with seams.
creating rainbows.

I was one of them.
with passion to hold the world.
we ran and we ran.
guided by the scent of morning feast.

then I saw Him standing by the river.
a brother of white demon.
in his furry mantle of warmth.
but a ferocious grin, hidden.

and everybody continues...



ACT II

I saw my friends left me.
one-by-one.
unaware of His presence.
while tempted by the prize.

as an ice cold hands rips through the heart.
disgracefully.
the heart feels no pain.
but the brain... fuzzed.

I drowned my face and cried in the depth of the ocean.
so it'd concealed between these fishes.

liquid food injected to the cells.
looks tasty, but creepy.
shattered within the hungry.
never returned, never will.

I decided to continue..



ACT III

I know what tomorrow's like.
even if I climbed the highest mountain.
Turning against the stream and reaches home.
No star shall engraved on my chest.

I know what yesterday means.
angst, confusion, disappointment.. no.
or happiness, grace, approval? neither it was.
but a chaotic wishes that never granted.

even if I were the one of those who will prevail.
the same price must I pay.
like my friends back then.
who lost to our dreams.

on a short walk in the afternoon.
we gave birth to the orphans.
the heart had stopped then.
but the body sleeps today.

as the morning come.
we saw children walks altogether.
continuously..
until they're all too tired to continue..


dan.. done!! yak sekali lagi, mohon masukannya, dan juga tolong apa intepretasi anda tentang cerita ini.. thx!

Libur Telah Tiba, Libur Telah Tiba.. Hore! Hore! Hore!!
Libur Telah Tiba, Libur Telah Tiba.. Hore! Hore! Hore!!
Libur Telah Tiba, Libur Telah Tiba.. Hore! Hore! Hore!!
...uittss!! tunggu dulu!!


nggak libur aku maaaaaakk!!!!

nggak pulang aku maaaaaaakkk!!

ada measured drawings maaaaaakk!!!!

wajib pulak itu maaaakkkkk!!

mahal pulak itu maaaaaakkk!!!

dan kondisi lapangan semakin sepi.. bosan dah, ga ada kerjaan.. tapi mo kekmana lagi maaaakkkk!!!


kenapa orang lain enak-enak aku aja yang susah? kenapa nilaiku jelek padahal aku udah susah payah?

eww.. bukanny mau mengeluh.. tapi, yaaaaa..

apa kata Morrissey ketika ia digugat oleh ex-bandmatenya dari The Smiths, Andy Rourke dan Mike Joyce?? "How dare you to be successful! I've been worked so hard since the demise of then".



so...

sial!!! final project yang mengesalkan.. gara2 persentase nilainya yang besar, nilai2ku sebelumnya jadi sia2!! bisa pulak aku dpt C+ secara keseluruhan.. padahal sebelumnya dapat B+, A-, dan B-.. tapi, tiba2..

final project yang mengesalkan, ide pertamaku tentang rumah dibawah air, ditolak!

kubikin yang baru dgn konsep yg jelas, bisa2nya konsepny dinilai rendah!! padahal biasanya kalo soal konsep aku nomor 1 (memang outcomenya seperti model dan drawingsny tdk sebanding dengan konsepku yang menggebu2)

yaa memang sebagai siswa asing di negri tetangga akan banyak hambatan sih... tapi tetap aja..

setan lah.. tiap kali kehidupanku serasa membaik, selalu dijatuhkan lagi..
&*RTE@&E@(!! damndamndamn!!

ditambah lagi ujian yg semakin mendekat.. apakah aku bisa!? terutama itung2an yang aku benci!! argghhh!!

ehmm, ehmm.. mungkin ada beberapa yang sudah tahu dan belum tahu kalo aku lagi menulis cerita, salah satunya adalah 'Harold and the Sunflower' yang sudah kupostkan sinopsis ceritanya di blogku.
dan gambaran karakternya juga bisa dilihat di deviationku, yang di skin iPod ntuh lhoo..

tapi, ceritanya ga selesai-selesai karena aku malas mengerjakannya.. hehehe
sebenarnya alasan utama kenapa kerjaku molor adalah karena aku ga pande mendeskripsikan keadaan lingkungan ketika cerita itu berlanjut. dikepalaku semua adegan sudah ada, tapi mendeskripsikannya itu loh..

dan akhirnya, aku memutuskan untuk membuat CERITA BARU yang sedang kukarang dan kukembangkan dalam bentuk seperti ini..

mungkin nanti akan kupostkan kedalam deviation ato di blogku yak..
oke, silahkan menikmati interlude chapter dan sedikit chapter pertama yang masih akan kuupdate dengan perubahan-perubahan dan perbaikan-perbaikan seperti grammar dan structure yang berantakan (bila ada).

enjoi..




#0 -interlude/the birth of the day-

the wind chills as the sweat of mother rest on the green boat.
the wear fade. little by little.

every being feels save under their closed eyelids, in the realm of dreams.
the screen of desires.
the bridge of fears.
the ultimate cure.

and they aware not. of flame from the east.


the stars may recall how the dusk creeping out to drive the darkness away.
as the flame arose from the sea, take to the sky.

thus calling the birds to sing.
the flowers to bloom
and men to serve their bread.
it was the birth of the day.


"I will give you riches you desire."
"strength, you admire."
"and the life that you won't to retire"
"then, may fruitful trees bestowed upon you."

She grants whoever seek them.

without exception, for a young man whose desires are too much to be real.
of a thirst that cannot be quenched by rice grains and morning dews.
neither by a sword and gold.
for a price, equal to offer.

neatly but everlastingly.
the price is a bit too much.
too much for a boy who never seen the world,
too much for a dreamer.

for a boy with envious feelings toward his friends.
of their courage.
and a pity.
of their ignorance.


of carbon stains over the sheets.
covered by thin soft leather.
which mothers passed to their daughters.
and fathers to their sons.

did the boy inherited from his father as well.
he began to fall.
from the perfect world he desire.
from a permanence he expected


that's how the days dragged on.
all the same occurrence, over the years and millenias.
on a great flow they believe.
to a perfect being they wished be.

never changed.
never ends.


but not for the boy.

-end of #0-



#1 -the news-

of legion of horses that runs trough the horizon.
of their foots, which bursting flames.
stabbed by the sleeping rocks.
kissed by the dry sands.

as the steps banging over and over.
like falling rains touched the ground, cruelly but surely.
and over the dust that rises to heaven.
may good news they bring upon you..(continued)



---update---
yak!! yang ini sudah diperbaiki sedikit agar menjadi potongan-potongan stanza dan couplets, meskipun beberapa baris masi berdiri sendiri.. jadi yang kubikin ini dikategorikan apa ya?? free verses kah!?

ikut2an si
baiklah, kita mulai..

Aku adalah Goki
Bukan Bule'
Cakep lah...
Dreamer!? yes I am!!
Ernest Hemingway, salah satu pengarang idolaku
F1, pengen nonton, tapi ga punya duit..
Goki adalah Aku (lihat keatas!!!)
Harold and the Sunflowers, cerita buatanku..
Inggris dan Iceland, pengen kesana.. tapi ga tahan dingin..
Johnny Marr, (bekas) kawannya Morrissey (liat kebawah!!)
Kurus!!!
Lambat mengingat, tapi ingat banyak!
Morrissey, idolaku nomor 1!!
Nabung ga pernah..
Oscar Wilde, bahasanya tulisannya keren!! aku suka!!
Pokoknya aku ga mau makan sayur!!
Quote buatanku dapat ditemui di profil Facebook ku.
Rizky Prambudi Tanrian, nama asli cuyy!!
Suka menabung, rajin belajar, dan patuh pada orang tua (seehh..)
Tukang tidur
Uangku suka beserakan kemana-mana
Volks Wagen a.k.a. VW safari, mobil bapakek yang pertama..
Waktuku kecil hidupku amatlah senang!! (ayo nyanyikan bersama)
Xavier alias Professor X, salah satu idolaku.. tapi kerenan Magneto sih..
Zebra adalah salah satu hewan yang belum pernah kunaiki..

err.. kurang, pengen bikin lagi...hohoho